1. This introduction does a good job stating why this topic is an important one to be looked at. You state impacts that this issue has on people and why. One comment I had was that you should add who specifically this involves but I later realized that was the gap of your information. b. You used sources when necessary which gave better information and proved why this topic was important. 2. This does discuss related research and introduces the gap at the end- how college students would be perfect for this study. All of the information is very clear. 3. I don't think you gave your research questions. Add these in the methods section. 4. The language is very clear and I understood exactly where you were going with the research!
1. The methods section has clear headings. 2. You used specifics about who you were studying and how old they were and where they were from 3. Try to add a little bit more to the procedure section because I understood what you were saying but you could make it even more clear 4. 100 percent add more to the data analysis because this is a huge part of the date you're telling the reader how you analyzed it
1. This introduction does a good job stating why this topic is an important one to be looked at. You state impacts that this issue has on people and why. One comment I had was that you should add who specifically this involves but I later realized that was the gap of your information.
ReplyDeleteb. You used sources when necessary which gave better information and proved why this topic was important.
2. This does discuss related research and introduces the gap at the end- how college students would be perfect for this study. All of the information is very clear.
3. I don't think you gave your research questions. Add these in the methods section.
4. The language is very clear and I understood exactly where you were going with the research!
1. The methods section has clear headings.
2. You used specifics about who you were studying and how old they were and where they were from
3. Try to add a little bit more to the procedure section because I understood what you were saying but you could make it even more clear
4. 100 percent add more to the data analysis because this is a huge part of the date you're telling the reader how you analyzed it