Overall your paper flowed very well and was easy to understand. After reading your paper I recommend three things: make gap clear, look over your reference page, and add an appendix. Your last paragraph in your introduction was strong but I would make a sentence to specifically state your gap so it is clear for the reader.
Next, I recommend you look over your reference page. The structure and format is correct. I would just check your capitalization on some words. Overall, you met the four source requirement. Along with using your sources well throughout your introduction.
Lastly, I would recommend adding an appendix so you get full points. Within your survey questions present it is hard to tell if you asked questions specific to your data.
I really liked your discussion section of your paper. It allows the reader to quickly reread the purpose of this study and the results from it. Fix the few minor errors and you should be good to go!
Overall your paper was really good and I was able to understand the research done and the results. I think your paper flowed really well and was easy to follow, but there are some things that can be improved. One thing that I was confused by was I wasn’t sure what your gap was so maybe try to make that more clear. You want the gap to be one of the last things you talk about in the intro. Something else that can be added to your paper is a appendix at the end. This will help the readers get a better idea on the questions that were asked. It is also a required part of the paper. Other than those things your paper was really good and doesn’t need many changes!
Overall your paper flowed very well and was easy to understand. After reading your paper I recommend three things: make gap clear, look over your reference page, and add an appendix. Your last paragraph in your introduction was strong but I would make a sentence to specifically state your gap so it is clear for the reader.
ReplyDeleteNext, I recommend you look over your reference page. The structure and format is correct. I would just check your capitalization on some words. Overall, you met the four source requirement. Along with using your sources well throughout your introduction.
Lastly, I would recommend adding an appendix so you get full points. Within your survey questions present it is hard to tell if you asked questions specific to your data.
I really liked your discussion section of your paper. It allows the reader to quickly reread the purpose of this study and the results from it. Fix the few minor errors and you should be good to go!
Overall your paper was really good and I was able to understand the research done and the results. I think your paper flowed really well and was easy to follow, but there are some things that can be improved. One thing that I was confused by was I wasn’t sure what your gap was so maybe try to make that more clear. You want the gap to be one of the last things you talk about in the intro.
ReplyDeleteSomething else that can be added to your paper is a appendix at the end. This will help the readers get a better idea on the questions that were asked. It is also a required part of the paper.
Other than those things your paper was really good and doesn’t need many changes!